Query #19 Re-Worked!

authorAlannian has sent Goblin a very strong re-working of his/her query for Alannian and the Sword of Azallyan. It's available for viewing in the comment section of the original post, and I'm sure the author would appreciate more feedback! Please drop by and say what you think of the new version, and thank you all for your continued participation.

~Goblin

Query #19 Re-Worked in the Comments:
Alannian and the Sword of Azallyan